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Meet my OCs 4 by Lukael-Art

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nice characters, shadowing and hair design is excelent. Youve got a very good linehaul too, but you should work on drawing the skins aswell as wounds a bit more... fleshy and bloody ^^ the flesh around the teeth of the 2. character aswell as the wound in the chest of the 4. character look very unnatural and misplaced. On the other hand the way you draw the clothes is almost perfect. The shadows are very natural and the few spots of light make it look almost real. The way youre drawing the hair is also nice but I cant really tell since Im not good at drawing hair myself too.
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Lukael-Art Nov 26, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks a lot for taking the time to write this :) I always love getting critiques!
The reason the mouth and chest of the characters isn't more fleshy and bloody is because they've had these for a very long time so they're only scars by now.
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